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medusasstory asked: In your 21 Reasons You Think You Don't Have Time To Write, I didn't quite understand number 5. I haven't realized I need help with what?

Sometimes people get stuck and they don’t think to ask for help from a wise reader friend. Also, sometimes people need help for real life kinds of things. Like housework, errand running, or medication for mental illness problems. Realizing you need help is often the most important step towards getting it.

21 Reasons You Think You Don’t Have Time to Write

1. You are letting people tell you that you should be doing other things with your time.

2. You can’t live with the level of clean that your family accepts as normal.

3. You haven’t decided to treat your writing seriously and so no one around you treats it seriously, either.

4. You haven’t made yourself a writing space.

5. You haven’t realized that you need help.

6. You do what is urgent rather than what is necessary.

7. You don’t let your kids and other people solve their own problems.

8. You think that someday you will have more time for writing.

9. You are spending time doing things you actually don’t care about.

10. You are actually using distractions as an excuse not to write.

11. You are terrified of writing, of actually sitting down and putting yourself on the page.

12. You are too busy criticizing the best selling books that you are reading to write something better.

13. You don’t know what to do with a blank page.

14. You don’t know how to turn off your internal editor.

15. You talk a good game, but you don’t play it.

16. You need to do a little planning and research before you start.

17. You don’t actually like writing. You like having written. (Join the club.)

18. You need to write the first line of the next chapter before leaving for the day.

19. You need to spend time remembering what it is you love about writing.

20. You have convinced yourself that you need 2 hours to write and don’t know how to use the 20 minute chunks you actually have.

21. You don’t have notebooks scattered through the house, including in the bathroom, to jot down inspiration.

The Rose Throne: Timeline

Timeline is one of the trickiest things for me as an author. This may be because I don’t outline or it may be a problem for all authors and all books. For me, there were two distinct tasks involved in this.

1. Condensing events

My first draft of The Rose Throne had Issa and Ailsbet begin as pre-teens, about age 11. They met each other briefly, became friends, and then spent another 6-7 years apart before meeting again at age 17. I think I did this in part because I was used to spending a lot of time building backstory for my main characters. In The Princess and the Hound, Prince George begins as a young child and ages up through about 70 pages of the book.

But The Rose Throne was a very different book than The Princess and the Hound, in part because there were two viewpoint characters who grew up in different kingdoms and had very different views of the magic system which they actually share. But in addition to that, I think The Rose Throne is for an older audience than The Princess and the Hound. And there were other reasons for me to condense the story, which included the fact that if Issa and Ailsbet had met and become friends as younger figures, a lot of the narrative tension around their relationship was taken away from the rest of the book.

I cannot say how often I have done critiques on manuscripts in which I tell the author that the timeline needs to be condensed. It’s a major change, but increasing the tension often makes other narrative problems disappear or at least become easier to fix. It improves pacing enormously and makes the structure of the novel really pop out and make itself obvious. If you are meandering through your plot slowly, more tension will help you find your climax and move toward it more easily.

2. Day by day

So the second timeline issue was a chapter-by-chapter day-by-day issue. This happened at a much later stage in the process, at nearly the final revision before copyediting. After I had condensed the book events into one year, I needed to make sure that the seasons were right for each chapter and scene, and that events happened in the right order. You would be surprised at how often I had to shift things backward or forward in time so that one event that caused another didn’t happen chronologically after it in my narrative.

What I did to fix this problem was make a chart for each chapter and then type in a date. Now, the kingdoms of Rurik and Weirland don’t have our Roman calendar and I purposely never referred to our months or days of the week. I always feel like fantasy loses its sense of other-worldliness if it relies on our conventions too much (unless it’s set in our world, in which case, it’s fine). So instead I used seasons and day numbers. Each event happened on a given day in a given season. When I put them all together with a short one-sentence explanation of each chapter, I could glance through and make sure there weren’t any long, unexplained absences (which, of course there were, but I had to fix). I also could see whether too much happened in one stretch. This visual was a useful way to make sure the scenes were organized properly and that the events happened in a measured fashion.

I still have trouble with timeline in most books that I am working on now. Maybe one day I will figure out a way to hold it all in my head and not make a mistake. Ha!

What We Control—and What We Don’t

What We Writers Control:

1. When we write.

2. Where we write.

3. Learning to write better.

4. How focused we make our writing time.

5. Who we associate with and whether those people aid our writing or not.

6. What we send out and to whom.

7. Our on-line presence.

What We Don’t Control as Writers:

1. When we are published.

2. How much money we are offered.

3. Our sales numbers.

4. Reviews

5. Awards

6. What we write. I don’t mean choosing between projects here, which we can do, but to some degree, the story chooses us and we write it as only we can write it. There is only so much tinkering in worldview we can manage and that’s OK.

Kathy Miller at goodreads writes: “This book has it all ~ an evil king, battles for power, attempts to join two kingdoms in peace, mystery, intrigue, fantasy, love ~ something for everyone of all ages. Easy, fast read.”

“From the first chapter I found myself hooked by Ms. Harrison’s writing. She has a way with crafting a story that kept me reading page after page. The pacing was perfect and the story offered the perfect element of mystery with regards to the ending.”

Sebrina Parker from Goodreads.

Sebrina also says she wishes that she believed the second book would tell her more about Ailsbet. But she assumes I will only talk about Issa and Kellin. Au contraire, my dear reader friend. The second book has got it all going on for Ailsbet in Aristonne. She meets the prince! And he has some plans of his own!

“I did enjoy the writing and world building, but it left me wanting more.”

http://www.theflashlightreader.com/2013/05/review-rose-throne-mette-ivie-harrison.html

Mwahahah! I am flattered. Readers who want more are the best kinds of readers to have!

“This is a deeply imaginative story, of two distinctly different young women, their upbringing, their duty to their countries, and their true loves. Each has her own unique power. The two young women, thrust together by the decisions of their fathers, eventually become friends and confidants. The story touches on various levels of love; love of country and duty, love of power, love of music, and love for one another.

The explanation of the various countries in this world was easy to visualize once the vocabulary became second nature. I could see the land bridge that separated the two kingdoms, and feel the fury of the ocean and how it affected those with powers. I was intrigued by the people without powers, the `unweyrs’, and how they were the only ones that easily traversed the lands. So, in the end, even they had powers.

This is a great story for young adults. The romance is sweet, yet powerful. It also shows that sometimes true power lies in nothaving power at all, and strength lies in knowing when to give power up. I appreciated that Ailsbet’s “true love” was something beyond romance with another - and that it was her deep devotion to music that guided her decisions, and her heart.”
http://www.amazon.com/Rose-Throne-Mette-Ivie-Harrison/dp/1606843656/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1368633696&sr=1-1&keywords=the+rose+throne+by+mette+ivie+harrison

She got it! She really got it!

I am a bit confused by readers who talk about the double romance in The Rose Throne. Issa and Kellin is definitely a subtle romance. And there’s the friendship romance between Issa and Ailsbet. But Ailsbet has no romantic partner in this book. Her father keeps throwing her at the absolutely wrong guys. Her only love is music, and that is what is so great about her as a character! She is complete without a guy because that is who she is.

I also love that she felt the slow and gradual sense of being set into this world. The magical terminology may be a bit confusing at first, but once you’ve read a couple chapters, it should feel like second nature, like this is your world, too.

“The turmoil in this novel is written superbly and made it tough to put the book down.”

http://findmeinabook.com/2013/05/07/the-rose-throne-by-mette-ivie-harrison/

Loved this review from Marie on goodreads:

“I pretty much loved this book. I think Ailsbet and Marlissa are good, strong, and smart characters; they are not helpless females in a world dominated by men, which is truly admirable and particularly refreshing in the world of young adult novels where supposedly headstrong females are all talk and no action. Even better, they don’t turn into whimpering lovesick fools when they are in the presence of men they have romantic feelings for. “